Written for https://dversepoets.com/2023/10/16/quadrille-186-fold/
Fold
Is life a dream,
where my
wounded heart
is folded
too thin
to cope?
Books by author Diana Coombes
Written for https://dversepoets.com/2023/10/16/quadrille-186-fold/
Fold
Is life a dream,
where my
wounded heart
is folded
too thin
to cope?
I am a fifty something mother of two grown up children, and one beautiful grandchild. I have been married for nearly thirty-four years. My first book was published ten years ago. I wrote my book Sticks and Stones because of my experience of being bullied at school. View more posts
Profound.
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We are all at the place, one time or another.
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This is a beautiful piece, but you’ll need a few more words to be a true Quadrille (which contains exactly 44 words.)
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I think I read the number of words wrong. Sorry.
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Don’t ever be sorry for being inspired to write!
Just letting you know, in case you want to play with it more. Or for next time.
The Quadrille is always 44 words.
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lovely poem Diana! :–)
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Thank you.
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