Written for https://skepticskaddish.com/category/poetry/poetry-prompt/
Where did you go to when you closed your eyes?
I hold your hand when time it dies
One last breath as you find a smile
Does he take you the extra mile?
I found the answer in a robin red
lingering near when I feel dread
My faith is like a favourite saying
Love is stronger when I am praying.
When it is my turn to transform my light
A terrifying time; I give up the fight
My angel guide – I see dad stroll
Please don’t grieve, he protects my soul.
I like this deeply poignant, tender piece of verse, capturing the transition of grief, spirituality and the comfort found in the idea of a reunion beyond this world 🩷
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Thank you so much 🩷
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This is beautiful. I was with my mother and my father when each of them died. I can feel your ache.
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🥰 thank you
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I wasn’t there when my parents died either. When my brother-in-law died, we were all there, and I found it peaceful.
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yes, yes. they are still here looking after us, really. yes. this is lovely, Diana. thanks for sharing it.
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I believe my dad is watching over me, and that the same love is in my son’s actions. He is always there with a hug, if he knows I am not feeling myself.
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Nice!
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What a gentle, touching write, Diana! Thanks for joining in. ❤️
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What a gentle, touching write, Diana! Thanks for joining in. ❤️
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Thank you 🥰
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Diana, I love how the robin becomes a small, living answer to such a huge question about death, faith, and whether love can still reach us after someone is gone.
~David
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hi, Diana❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Kim Whysall-Hammond, is live until Monday:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2026/10/21/w3-prompt-234-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David
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hi, Diana❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Dennis, is now live until Monday:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2026/10/28/w3-prompt-235-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David
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Thank ypu
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