https://fivedotoh.com/2021/08/21/fowc-with-fandango-exacerbate/
https://ragtagcommunity.wordpress.com/2021/08/21/rdp-saturday-frothy-as-air/
Trying this in first person – what do you think? First or third person?
Weeks of comfort aboard this communal ship gives me strength. Guilt as frothy as air depletes this. How can I sit amongst good people when adventure waits in the ocean?
‘You okay?’ Mary asks.
Kindness exacerbates my guilt – there are many dangers in this ocean. The sea, a cruel carrion of death, but I want to out there. Pre-loved from when I was too young to talk, soft water beckons.
Writer Ravenclaw 
First person gives you the opportunity to show a lot more of what they’re actually feeling, so in that sense yes, it works.
I normally go for 3p but use 1p when the emotion is crucial.
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Thank you, I keep going to first person for this. I don’t know why, but the writing feels right. Maybe because it is out of my comfort zone.
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I always write in the first person. The turmoil you portray here sounds more visceral in the first person. Nicely done. Thanks for joining in. 😊
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I always write in third, but for some reason I kept going to first person. I think I will keep to first and present to see where it goes.
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Great idea!
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Definitely, in the first person. It draws the reader in and makes the scene more visible. You’ve left me wanting to know more!
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I will leave it in first person. When I start writing I am veering towards I not she.
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Like the others have commented – first person has much more impact, keep writing!
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