Trying this in first person – what do you think? First or third person?
Weeks of comfort aboard this communal ship gives me strength. Guilt as frothy as air depletes this. How can I sit amongst good people when adventure waits in the ocean?
‘You okay?’ Mary asks.
Kindness exacerbates my guilt – there are many dangers in this ocean. The sea, a cruel carrion of death, but I want to out there. Pre-loved from when I was too young to talk, soft water beckons.