Pirate in Training – From Word Prompts

FOWC

https://fivedotoh.com/2021/08/21/fowc-with-fandango-exacerbate/

https://ragtagcommunity.wordpress.com/2021/08/21/rdp-saturday-frothy-as-air/

RDP SATURDAY: FROTHY AS AIR - featured image

Trying this in first person – what do you think? First or third person?

Weeks of comfort aboard this communal ship gives me strength. Guilt as frothy as air depletes this. How can I sit amongst good people when adventure waits in the ocean?

‘You okay?’ Mary asks.

Kindness exacerbates my guilt – there are many dangers in this ocean. The sea, a cruel carrion of death, but I want to out there. Pre-loved from when I was too young to talk, soft water beckons.

Published by writerravenclaw

I am a fifty something mother of two grown up children, and one beautiful grandchild. I have been married for nearly thirty-four years. My first book was published ten years ago. I wrote my book Sticks and Stones because of my experience of being bullied at school.

8 thoughts on “Pirate in Training – From Word Prompts

  1. First person gives you the opportunity to show a lot more of what they’re actually feeling, so in that sense yes, it works.

    I normally go for 3p but use 1p when the emotion is crucial.

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