Monday Prompts – #FOWC #RDPMONDAY and


approach, looking, street, breath, strange.

with hypnotic and scorch

I approach the scorching void, looking all around me, but all I hear is her words drawing me in. They are so calming, soothing, like I will always be safe. No longer in control I go where I am led.

It is strange, but the street is changing into something else. A familiar street, where the breath of fog carries me further, until I am told to sit down. I do this because I am told to.

Everything she says appears in front of me, and I am not alone. I am in a race, changed into a horse. There are hurdles I need to jump over, which I do. Scenery changes, and so do I.

‘I’m counting down from five and you’ll be back with us. Five, four, three, to one . . .’

Laughter, all around me, and I realise what has happened. I have been in a hypnotic trance all the time.

Me, the person who said I could never be put under.

Published by writerravenclaw

I am a fifty something mother of two grown up children, and one beautiful grandchild. I have been married for nearly thirty-four years. My first book was published ten years ago. I wrote my book Sticks and Stones because of my experience of being bullied at school.

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